All Comments on 'The Fourth Date'

There is no denying that this chapter is well-written, but its introduction and build-up is too short, as is the subsequent love scene (which is also well-written). Having said that, one can only look forward to more adventures with Elizabeth and Kyle.

Please don't make it one of these romantic boring love stories had a little bit of spice. I think you should carry on with the adventures ,however something should happen where she has to choose between the husband and lover. you could even add it where she came back one time and found her husband had packed everything because he found out she was cheated or she was too busy enjoying herself looking it off a way she didn't realise her husband had been enjoying himself and found another woman which means they both live happily ever after.