All Comments on 'The Fraternity Ch. 01'

My kinda story!

Hurry up with the next part… can’t wait to hear what the Special Project is!

This is promising to be an interesting experience to learn about but also a very fun read. Great characters and I am hoping that more backstory will make itself known since you have done an impressive job creating a situation and a school/world where this isn’t so far fetched and seemingly part of the norm. I am looking forward to seeing what comes next.

J.D.

Very good and you had me getting hot and wet .. I think that would have made college a lot more fun .. please write more .. Tiffany

While your stories are good, your use of very long paragraphs make them unnecessarily difficult to read.