by DeanThomas
It's 2 am and I'm laughing my ass off just before bed! It'll be on you if anyone reports me for the disturbance and I wake up in a straitjacket!
But in all seriousness this was probably one of THE best stories on LE I have ever read, it made me laugh like a maniac, had me thinking real hard for some real-life problems women deal with daily, made me enjoy the future of the story and its possibilities, most of all it was an intriguing story that took itself lightly and put a spin on a theme used in the past but never so cleverly. Just like every other hot blooded man I enjoyed the pseudo lesbo action and hopefully there will be similar scenes in the future where Evan can discover his more feminine side and also explore the finer art of female sexuality. Then again I really wouldn't mind something similar happen to Emily and their dad - now don't go all "But that's so gay" on me here, I'm just admitting that some diversity in sexy time won't hurt anyone. Just not sure how the waxing thing would come over in a manly fashion....
Anyhow I gave it a 5* and I really hope you post the next one pronto.
This is so unbelievable it's almost believable.5 Stars!!! Can't wait to see what Emily and Evan get up to. The 'rents seem to be hot to trot. This is good almost clean fun. Holding my breath for the next part.
Chrissie
TBC
and some healthy food for thought.
If or when the switch is reversed there will be some stimulating memories.
Great second chapter to the story though I am thinking the next chapter will be from the sisters POV in the brothers body, but I could be wrong.
Look forward to the next chapter how ever you write it.
You *could* use a proofreader. But, in context, this misspelling is very funny. I am enjoying this story. Keep it up!
Plz finish it already damn cliff hangers
Great story but erased.
Screw rewriting
I love to read this kind of freaky Friday stories and this one is quite interesting. This second chapter has a different tone, I'm curious about where you're going. I hope you won't let us without a satisfying end to that story and its characters.