by DeanThomas
So happy you put out another chapter, Loved the previous chapters and was like Christmas seeing another chapter up. please don't stop!
Please don't make Evan in Emily's body have sex with any other guy. Except for Emily in Evan's body. And please please don't involve Mike in any family play with a lesbian daughter and straight son
Sorry but when I read the mom daughter scene I had to take a point off. I just didn't believe it. It doesn't matter how good it was because it did not fit. Also the Evan stuff and Ian. I was hoping for maybe some Susan action, or Evan and Emily exploring a bit but nope. You are sending the story where I really don't want it to go. I want Evan and Emily front and centre and the other characters. I almost gave it a 3.
Ian is only a tool. While it may seem that things are going off track, I am hoping that you will come to understand and like the results.
DeanThomas
I desperately need the next chapter. This might be the best story posted here.
Story is progressing incredibly. Love where this is going. PLEASE continue!!!
I love this story and I want to know how it ends!! To hot of a story to leave on a cliffhanger
For PETE sake, why the fuck do you keep letting the mother doing the whole action?
Don't take me wrong, you are an awesome writter and the story is funny, but if the twins are such good friends as you stated in the beggining why on earth don't they talk about stuff?
Also, I love the mom is ok with them having sex. But why not ask the hot teacher?