All Comments on 'The Freedom of Slavery Ch. 05'

by astartevenus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
amazing

I can not wait for the next one please hurry this is the best story I have read on here in forever. I can't stand the wait lol your an amazing writer

shyintxshyintxover 12 years ago
Love it

I agree this is one of my favorite stories on here it is so different and unique, please post faster.

LiathLisLiathLisover 12 years ago

I'm really liking your story. Finding it very interesting and unique, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I agree with the above.. post faster! >.>

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omg

I'm an addict this is my crack please give me my next fix lol...please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good

Ok so when I first started reading your story I had an impression it was like Doctorwolf's a slave to the servants. I actually love the way you wrote nancy. What people don't realize when you go through something so traumatic you have a survivor mode so no matter what circumstance you are in you adapt. And yes it can happen exactly how Nancy did it at the slave auction. Also being the fact she is a rational thinker and does not let her emotions driver her that is how she reacted not everyone is going to scream and shout and beg there are people who will take it in stride in order to survive. Keep writing because I enjoy what you are writing and don't let other people's negative comments get to you. Its just that negative comments. Keep up the good work

astartevenusastartevenusover 12 years agoAuthor
Reply to Anonymous 9/13

Thank you! Finally someone understands what I was getting at! I personally could not stomach the thought of writing a weak female character, and while I understand that some people may be confused by some things, this story was written and posted to be different, not a damn harlequin like what some of my commenters have been looking for. Thank you for your support.

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