All Comments on 'The Friend With Benefits'

You have a good story but it literally destroys itself with all the spelling and grammar errors. You desperately need a proofreader or two to help you get the story cleaned up and flowing properly. Most authors here use proofreaders , as do all professionals. Nobody is going to change your story, it really is a good story.

For example…right before Kim cums again , he says he..”continued to message Kim’s clit…”. That should be massage, which means to rub it. If he was really messaging it, he would be sending her clit texts on his phone. lol. I am not giving you a tough time, just showing how one little letter can totally change the meaning of what was happening.

Uncle Al