All Comments on 'The Frigid Wastes Pt. 01'

This was a fantastic idea and your prose is very natural to read. You very much have the makings of an amazing storyteller.

With that said there were a few reality-check moments that did break the spell for me momentarily

Your description of the sun cycles in the artic seemed to indicate a regular day/night pattern. It is rare that there is actually full darkness or full daylight in a single day depending on the time of year.

Also the Jeep in the arctic is just not a thing. The largest vehicle that can do anything not on an established road is a snowmobile. Maybe a futuretech mobile research station would be believable. A hybrid tank/jeep.

Those two minor research details aside I thoroughly enjoyed this. One cannot find good anthro Domme content very easily. Thank you for your art.

Loved it! Hoping for a sequel!

Hey like your stories. Just I would update it the term “Eskimos” in reference to the native indigenous peoples of the north especially in Canada and Greenland is offensive most prefer Inuit.

Also agree with Shibnicity the permafrost and snow would cause issues with any vehicle not tracked - FYI there are track systems for Jeep’s mattracks are a good example

very nice read , keep it going ,do not let some one tell you to change ,to keep from offending some one ,everyone has an opinion.

[27.08.22]

Hey Shibnicity [from a year ago+], you obvi have never seen the Top Gear Artic Special where Jeremy Clarkson and James May drove a modified Toyota Hi-Lux Pick up in the Arctic to reach the then current North Pole!

Good story

Not the worst thing that could happen to you in a frozen waste land