by terramyr
Very nicely done. You managed to capture the feel and describe the scenario perfectly. I hope to see more from you in the future.
Truely tasteful, one of the best stories i have read in some time. Verry, verry well done i hope to see you write similar stories.
I enjoyed it..very nicely done, polished story... my only quip would be to use "alright/allright" intead of "OK", to keep in spirit with the theme of story.. regards