All Comments on 'The Fuck'

Damn Hot read! Wives will push every button until hubby loses it. Get all ya can, while ya can. Old age comes way to fast. Like to read more about his job, and future Fucking for these two. Five stars!

oh yes - a follow up please

That. Was. Awesome. Would’ve been a good story with only the wife’s POV but adding the husband’s turned it into a kickass story! Chapter 2....soon!!

But what happens with the investigation!

But the spelling and grammar and general lack of giving a fuck about your story made me give it a 2!

Interesting presentation, illustrating the contrast of husband’s vs wife’s perception. That’s the good part. Then there’s the lack of consistency. There’s at least 2 kids; they married while early in the first pregnancy; and the youngest is at least 17... but they’re married 17 years? The math doesn’t work. Next up: the slap. If he hasn’t raised his hand to her before, then he’s conscious enough to avoid a facial bruise - he wouldn’t hit her face. More likely he’d lift her out of his way and walk past; or spank her ass (more than one hard smack).

But watch the similes

Very hot story. Loved it. That's the way it should be. Primal and by instinct. Thing is women speak of rights and all that in this woke culture we live in. However, deep down they respond to this like a duck takes to water. It resonates with everyone. Why? Cause it's natural as breathing. Woman respond to a man being dominant in the bedroom. So long as he's attentive in other aspects, too. I don't understand people complaining about this story. It's beautiful. Bring more if you get a chance. Thank you

Second-person writing is weak.