by iwiwt
Hey all! Thanks for giving this a read! I really like this one, and would LOVE to hear from you if you enjoyed or had any feedback on it; I'll be working on turning this into a bit of a series from here so let me know if you'd like to see anything in issues to come. Be good!
A genuinely unique premise for a story that contains all the depraved shit I like wrapped up in a wholesomeness I love. I’m on my way to check out your other story.
If you’d like an editor send me an email at wafflepoet at gmail dot com.
Thanks so much @Vautour! Really appreciate the generous feedback, and I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the read! I hope you get a chance to check out the other chapters!
This was absolutely wonderful read. I've recently discovered your writing and you have a perfect blend of humor, crafting a tale, and sexiness. I absolutely want to see that fuckdoll certification list and see what my partner and I can check off!
This is definitely a form of femdom in this chapter.
Good writing, no noticeble errors, and you didn't repeatedly use the same words needlessly.
5 stars for quality.
5 stars for plot twist.
5 stars for having actual characters.
Nice.
Thank you! I've been trying to clean this one up to get up on other platforms and there are definitely areas to improve haha. I love the comment though, thank you so much @Cheeachaser.
And thank you too @anon; I hope you and your partner have thought of some fun things to try together!!!