by danishmichaela
sorry couldnt get past the intelctual b.s. on hetrosexual constraints. plus just skimming thru she goes from not doing 1 nighters to being a totally mindless slut to a gangbang.
but obviously unaccustom to someone with real literary talents.
Great job, Michy!
Have heard that most women either fantasize about being gang banged and/or forceably taken. Not RAPED...just taken
Lee
There are holes big enough to drive a truck through in the narrative. (Like if her job is so important to her, why would she do a gang bang at the very university at which she is also the 'face' of their investor/benefactor?)
I'd rather focus on the guy. Really? I agree - that 'we're all free, etc.' BS is reminiscent of what one hears in college - and grows out of. Except he did not, it seems. How can a smart woman really buy into that BS, which is about as deep as a piece of toast. Plus, based on his actions, he's really a misogynist. And she finds that intriguing?
Sexual obsession is one thing. If that what this is supposed to be - it does not measure up. It was easy to skim over huge parts of this story because I could predict what was going to happen. And of course, it did.
For a start, recognise this for what it is, an erotic story site and not a fuckingEnglish exam! Secondly at least pay the writer and the story the respect to read it fully rather than skim through and then make comments!
NIce job Michaela! I read this for what it is, for what your bio says it is - a fantasy laid out on paper (or is that pixels these days?) Could have used a little editing, but it wasn't inordinately distracting. All in all - fun to read and erotically titillating,
Oh fabulous, so fucking sucking sexy, fucked and sucked to extreme and insane levels of sexual pleasure, totally blissed up. A couple of my girlfriends and I acted out some of this story, me getting totally drunk on cunt juice (heavenly nectar to me) The three of us off our faces with fuck lust, the girls/ women just pure cunt for sucking and fucking. There is a lot of you in your writing and what would I not give to enjoy an orgy of pleasure with you. More and more of your work please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc's UK
Love your picture