by the_laughing_man
I loved this story. It got me so worked up that I went to find some yiffing videos. And I'm not sure but I might have found the video you mentioned in the story. Its very similar to what is described, but that could just be a coincidence.
He should tell her. Then agree to move in together to take care of the baby as a family.
Worthy, but the people have spoken: consider having him tell her in a 2nd ch
Disappointing that he will just keep it a secret. They could bond over their furry interest.
Or he could get a second phone and contact her with that so they could have another in-costume encounter without her knowing who he is, and just have it evolve from there.
If this is the end, it would be quite unsatisfying.
totally disagree that it's weird--well, yknow, it's weird, but in a human way that really works--and feel no need for a sequel! I'd read one, but this stands on its own! tremendous, captures the extreme mixed intimacy levels perfectly. love it!
The ending sucked…. You should continue the story, with him revealing the truth, them keeping the baby and moving in together…. Followed by more babies!
Seriously hoping for a sequel, loved it a lot. Maybe a sequel where the sister and some friends get screwed by the brother? Also still the possiblility that the sister might somehow know, since I doubt that he went everywhere in costume during the convention. Maybe one of her friends or someone saw him around, and thus she's lying about not knowing who the father is?
the perfect erotic fiction dosent ex....
dude thats perfect, i hope you write more ... or continue reporting.
A secret he'll carry until blood tests are done and they find out how close the genetics are.