All Comments on 'The Futa Ring Ch. 03: Wraith!'

wow . can there more to read ? please . thanks

I'm not sure where to take it next. Where would you like it to go?

"Gravity conspired with sheer determination... ," what a wonderfully sensual picture those words paint, bringing back memories of fulfilment and the guttural "ahhhh" pronouncement. You continue to amaze.

After a few years and by pure chance she finds the other ring. She is seduced by the power or controlled by it or is blckmailed or something, but she goes on a quest to reunite the two rings. Along The way, sexy hijinx ensues.

monicablu: You smooth talker you... :-) Thanks!

Anon.: Hmm. Or maybe Cat Lady has the other ring... The other ring was inspired by Plato's description of the Ring of Gyges, but its powers are coincidentally similar to the invisible boots that Ali found on her first visit to the magic shop. Has potential, though.

The passage of time succinctly portrayed...

A good friendly coupling to bring her her back to reality...

and she surrendered (?) the Ring ? Impressive.

I'm anxious to see what happens next... :-)

...since first reading "Forever Hard."

~ Monica

I've written Ali into a bit of a corner with this series, but it's not an unpleasant corner to end up in.