All Comments on 'The Future of Terra'

Interested to see where this is going.

Interesting start, a mix of Belgarion and wheel of time.

Please continue this story. It is already grabbing me and I suspect others as well. Does he get wrapped up with the Queen or her daughter, Is he going to be a successess at the games or is he going to be bumped out is such a manner he becomes a specticle. You have so many ways for tis story to develop, I am looking forward to the adventure of Marek 5 stars for an amazing opening.

Great start. Waiting for the rest.

Great beginning.

More please!!!

Is this why you stayed behind in Tar Valon, so you could write smut?

interesting start as mentioned below.

The lack of information on future chapters or it this is finished is a “let’s throw some crap at the barn and see if it sticks” moment. 1* for wasting the reader’s time.

First of all, I wrote this story in 2014. I have much more to this, but I now have to edit it. Second, if you think I wasted the reader's time, then please, let me read one of your stories to see if you have wasted a reader's time.

I am new to this site and I will try my hand at a bunch of the categories before I continue each story. That is, unless it is overwhelmingly a favorite. Then I will continue.

Please continue. I don't write long post I'm not a writer so I try not to judge I just enjoy the story thank you

Good start, got me hoping for more.

Creative and very delightful. This story definitely seems like it has some real potential. I hope you decide to explore this world. It would be a great joy to read more about this story.