All Comments on 'The Future of Travel'

There are a couple spots where some editing could help. Overall tho' you should be proud of this work. I look forward to reading more.

like the futuristic theme with reason to hope!

It might have been even a less sexy but better story if the whole thing was a prank and only she gets naked after being convinced to strip at the end. But this has more nudity and bare boobs, so it's cool that way, too.

5 stars. An alternate end would have been to have her present all day in the nude, then find out, over drinks, that it was a prank.

This is the kind of story I like best.

Sad/interesting that another female was the one to prank her. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.