All Comments on 'The Game'

Is there a follow through planned?

I would love to see what Jack comes up with next.

I am answering you - most definitely YES. A little on the exotic side for my taste but very, very good. Thank you - five stars.

Please continue with some other chapters. Go slowly but keep introducing new experiences. Thanks for this story.

Overall a good story hope to read more. It irked me that he kept saying trust me like it would be her fault if things got messed up or stopped and he kept telling her how awful it would be if she said red. Trust only goes so far and no sub/slave should feel guilty if they feel they need to say their safe word. If she she did say it he should feel guilty because he pushed her too far and he messed it up. He's the one responsible for the whole thing.

Bar the safe word continually being used as a threat i really enjoyed this rather unique story line, and would love to see what other plans Jack has for her.

4 stars and a please write more

Hope you continue this story till the end. Found it very interesting and arousing

Yes, IF you continue to introduce her gently into new experiences. No, if you plan for any kind of betrayal of her trust.

Please continue. Would love to see Jack continue to push Danielle's comfort levels.

....his heavy breathing and the bilge in his shorts

I would love to read another chapter or two.

Yes please. The slow introduction of new twists allows her to be seduced into compliance. I do hope the trust building is not misplaced...

Interesting and erotic. Please continue.

It's pretty intense and exciting. I particularly appreciate how Danielle's thoughts are presented and the most "non vanilla" parts, as the call, the guards, the clinic, the acupuncture and the sushi dinner.