All Comments on 'The Game'

Nice of you to tell us that you are married AND you have wives except for the one who isn't married but has a girlfriend. I always wondered what 'married' meant.

Lots of silly mistakes and a ridiculous plot. Needs a lot of work and an editor.

With apologies to @mafen - I thought this was wonderful. I loved the story - could not stop reading until the last word.

I hope we get to hear more about the group 18-20 years in the future.