All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 04'

This is insanely, ridiculously brilliant. I have nothing else to say except for, Amazing job! And you know what? I didn't even dare that there wasn't any sexual activity in it, if you had put it in, it would have ruined the whole story; but if you do decide put sex in it, make it as little as possible, but with really long hot sex. Please continue writing this series.