All Comments on 'The Games People Play'

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mordbrandmordbrandalmost 4 years ago
Guessed the direction as soon as she said her name

Still a great short one off. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Very entertaining. 5 Stars

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Very creative, at first it was sounding like the plot of “Sunset Boulevard”. Really appreciated the Beryl Markham reference! 5 stars.

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 2 years ago

To short. 5☆☆☆☆☆ I give 99% 5☆☆☆☆☆ just for entertaining me. Some are better than others. It is not the author's fault that I am not entailed in his story. That clearly rests on my shoulders.

Rhoan1921Rhoan1921about 2 years ago

Oh far to short, but yes enjoyable. It was rushed but who am I to complain, I did not write it but I did enjoy it.

I am a sucker for happy endings, just wish it had been a lot longer. Her name gave it away, but what possibilities it again would make a brilliant film.

jsch1947jsch1947almost 2 years ago

Wow!

Your imagination is awsome!

The character are vivid and delightful.

The story, is pure fantasy, yet fun to read. I wish it was longer.

I didn't like 'business' and I didn't finish it, score it, or comment.

I prefer to remain quiet if I can't say something worthwhile.

I have to really HATE it to do otherwise.

My only criticism, is trends.

I see a laziness in the writing.

It's much easier for the writer to make his characters rich. The richer, the better.

Writing about poor, or even middle class subjects, places limitations.

It's a comparatively minor flaw, and I didn't lower my score because of this.

The concept here was brilliant and I enjoyed it a lot.

Great job!

TonyspencerTonyspencerover 1 year ago

Great little story, 5*

ChopinesqueChopinesqueabout 1 year ago

Cleverly conceived, cleverly executed. Charming.

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