by PostScriptor
Still a great short one off. 5 stars.
Very creative, at first it was sounding like the plot of “Sunset Boulevard”. Really appreciated the Beryl Markham reference! 5 stars.
To short. 5☆☆☆☆☆ I give 99% 5☆☆☆☆☆ just for entertaining me. Some are better than others. It is not the author's fault that I am not entailed in his story. That clearly rests on my shoulders.
Oh far to short, but yes enjoyable. It was rushed but who am I to complain, I did not write it but I did enjoy it.
I am a sucker for happy endings, just wish it had been a lot longer. Her name gave it away, but what possibilities it again would make a brilliant film.
Wow!
Your imagination is awsome!
The character are vivid and delightful.
The story, is pure fantasy, yet fun to read. I wish it was longer.
I didn't like 'business' and I didn't finish it, score it, or comment.
I prefer to remain quiet if I can't say something worthwhile.
I have to really HATE it to do otherwise.
My only criticism, is trends.
I see a laziness in the writing.
It's much easier for the writer to make his characters rich. The richer, the better.
Writing about poor, or even middle class subjects, places limitations.
It's a comparatively minor flaw, and I didn't lower my score because of this.
The concept here was brilliant and I enjoyed it a lot.
Great job!