by LisaSmiles
I think I just found another contender for my "Never read this person's stories again" list.
I love the way you encourage the reader to read between the lines, while building the tension and sense of expectation between the characters, something I try to do in my own stories.
ignore the first two sad comments. This was fantastic. So hot and sexy. Keep writing!
An interesting plot. However, I kept waitingfor something naughty to happen. Don't get me wrong I much prefer longer more developed sfories, but I was getting bored at the end.
Flaps, bunny hole, funyums…so cute! Love pet names, though I’ve never heard these before. It was a fun read, somewhat vague as to what was happening sometimes. There was a bit of time jump at the end that I had to process (first year college suddenly when she’d been in high school at the beginning.) Nice overall.