All Comments on 'The Games Some Daughters will Play'

by LisaSmiles

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Weird

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Very weird

I think I just found another contender for my "Never read this person's stories again" list.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Great story. Will definitely read more from you.

redfoxx15redfoxx15about 6 years ago
Exquisite tension

I love the way you encourage the reader to read between the lines, while building the tension and sense of expectation between the characters, something I try to do in my own stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
amazing

ignore the first two sad comments. This was fantastic. So hot and sexy. Keep writing!

blackknight314blackknight314almost 5 years ago
Hmmm...

An interesting plot. However, I kept waitingfor something naughty to happen. Don't get me wrong I much prefer longer more developed sfories, but I was getting bored at the end.

m1km1n30m1km1n305 months ago

Flaps, bunny hole, funyums…so cute! Love pet names, though I’ve never heard these before. It was a fun read, somewhat vague as to what was happening sometimes. There was a bit of time jump at the end that I had to process (first year college suddenly when she’d been in high school at the beginning.) Nice overall.

Tenderfather55Tenderfather554 months ago

Kylie wasn’t alone , my daughter drives me crazy

MonsterGuyXMonsterGuyXabout 2 months ago

When Daddy falls down the bunny hole.

❤️🐇❤️

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