All Comments on 'The Gameshow: "How Far Can You Go?"'

What a great story, and well told too.

I laughed during the story and got excited at the same time. Enjoyed your writing

style and thank you for the story.

Hope you do a Post Story about the family after the game show incident and if their lives go back to normal. Step-daughter is pregnant etc.

But I still like it.

I stopped as soon as I saw it was second person shit.

I think the story would have been better if the father had been flagged by taking the black guy's dick in his mouth and sucking it or sucking both woman after he came on him

Thanks for all of the compliments and criticisms. It was my first ever attempt at an erotic story and it was fun to write. I wanted to keep it taboo without getting too crazy... I plan to keep writing, so follow me and check by every once and a while.

-Cheers