All Comments on 'The Gang Ch. 01'

Curious to see more.

I like this beginning though you should consider getting an editor or reading it aloud to yourself before you post future segments. Overall it is an intriquing write and I hope you continue.

The story sounds great so far but perhaps a bit too short?

Liked it nonetheless, Looking forward to the next chapter :]

You've gotta continue this story, I am soo hooked