All Comments on 'The Gangbang Club Pt. 01'

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GreatwanniGreatwanniabout 2 years ago

Great story! Hopefully Mabel will be able to loosen Jill up and get her to join the club next time!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

there's a lot of masculine energy in this story. does not feel like a woman's perspective at all. lots of focus on numbers, lots of focus on the men and their experience. very generic and not specific. lots of cliches and hackneyed phrases. this does not feel unique or set in a real universe.

AtrampboyAtrampboyabout 2 years ago

Loved it! Great story very very well told! I love the prestation style, I'm eager for ch 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Had potential, seems rushed. The writer has a lot of other better stories.

CanadianMCanadianMabout 2 years ago

A fun sexual romp.. Your stories are always entertaining... I am sure there will be a Part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Dr beulahthemick; Absolutely love, right amount of humour, do hope your not ending it here though, Mabel needs to show that prissy Jill how to have fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story. Nice start to a series. Glad Mabel had a B bush. Big fan of the bush. Surprisingly tame for 7 college guys. Would have figured she would have been manhandled and mistreated for their pleasure. Not that I'm complaining. 4⭐

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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