by kathrynmburke
Great story! Hopefully Mabel will be able to loosen Jill up and get her to join the club next time!
there's a lot of masculine energy in this story. does not feel like a woman's perspective at all. lots of focus on numbers, lots of focus on the men and their experience. very generic and not specific. lots of cliches and hackneyed phrases. this does not feel unique or set in a real universe.
Loved it! Great story very very well told! I love the prestation style, I'm eager for ch 2
Had potential, seems rushed. The writer has a lot of other better stories.
A fun sexual romp.. Your stories are always entertaining... I am sure there will be a Part 2
Dr beulahthemick; Absolutely love, right amount of humour, do hope your not ending it here though, Mabel needs to show that prissy Jill how to have fun.
Good story. Nice start to a series. Glad Mabel had a B bush. Big fan of the bush. Surprisingly tame for 7 college guys. Would have figured she would have been manhandled and mistreated for their pleasure. Not that I'm complaining. 4⭐