All Comments on 'The Garden Shed Ch. 01'

This story has huge potential! Please go on!

More please!

Just the right amount of tease. Just the right amount of action. Keep it going.

That was a great story!

You tell it like you have had a similar experience. Why do I think that ? Well I had a long time relationship with my sister from before we can discuss it on Lit. til midlife. Nice build up, nice tease...

Wow! What a great start, I can't wait to hear more about these two.

You've hit the 70's in England spot on

Loved the story . It takes me back to when I was young and my brother and I played.

I was older than him but we shared our learning together . Would love to see more like this. Please keep writing more of Brothers & Sis stories

Great story! Hope to see more.

An excellent story and I can't wait for the next chapter! I do love a good incest story!

throughout the story. Like the previous post, seems to have a tinge of truth. Reminds me of being in bed and my younger sister pulling my cock from my briefs to place it between her legs the slide back and forth.

Lots of memories from when I grew up dirt poor.

Great progression of the events. More brothers and sisters experience this type of love than people think. My mother and myself started out very similar.

A very hot story and yes the kind that is very arousing. I had no siblings but I know quite a few sisters and brothers had done a show and tell like in your story and a fair number at some point did more by touching, sharing thoughts and how they felt while doing that. A higher number than many might admit as girls jerked off their brothers and the brothers fingered and/or licked their sisters until they did cum. Many still do it and more than naught they also had sex with protection and some without. I sure hope they go further where Sue after she thought about it wants to suck him off and then Ben wants to suck her boobs and eat her to climax. Sure hope for more, thanks !!

Good story and as I grew up in England in the 50s, quite believable. It was so hard to see a naked girl. I was 23 before that happened.

I loved it, and the truth that you expressed about the nature of learning about sex in the late sixties and early seventies. I never had the experience with a sister, but a cousin and several girlfriends...

Hmm... good memories.

This sets up the actions to follow and does it so beautifully. The naivety displayed is certainly realistic. Thank you.

I do find the innocence of this kind of story exciting. It reminds me of the games my sister and I used to play, though we never went anywhere near as far as this!

Pretty well written and most enjoyable.

What would us dumb boys of the 50's have done without Sisters, and kissing Cousins? We all learned allot playing around back in those good ole days. Nice and hot little story.

A story is much more interesting when it is believable, and this was very realistic. I couldn't tell if it was fantasy or autobiography - I suspect a bit of both. Congratulations on a great start and thanks for your time and effort.

Now I'm going to read the rest.

I had similar experiences with my sister and a cousin when we were about the same age in the seventies. Very nicely written and believable thanks.

I've read this before, a long time ago, but it still is very erotic. Just wished I had a sister while growing up instead of a brother. I do remember when I was around 10 years old, we played "Doctor" with the little girl down the street. Of course at that age her chest looked the same as ours did, no tits, but I did get to look inside her panties. Very exciting for a kid.

Well, this story is just so hot even without them having sex. Loved it.

And done just right.

Nice slow buildup. Sexy as hell. Believable dialog.

Five stars.

(PS - It should be "all right" not "alright". "Already" is correct, but not "alright".)

Enjoyed it then

Enjoyed the story now, and not for the first time.

Terrific premise.

Great story. And subsequent chapters get even better.

So English.

Brings back some memories, I had a place I could go and "work" too, Penthouse, Mayfair, Fiesta all the good ones in the 70's. Lovely hairy pussies, still prefer them that way.

Nicely done.

Good, reminds me of my own with my school friend Norman and the old Fiesta magazines with my sister and Mums panties and Normans sister Moyra's panties

I didn't have a hidey hole but did get caught by my sisters several times, which did lead to some memorable times. Thanks for the reminder

Wow that brings back memories. My first sexual encounter was in a garden shed on a warm summers day.

They say smells are strong memory signalers. I know when ever I am in a shed on a summers day with that warm dry wood and dust smell it doesn't take much for it all to come flooding back

Great start to a potentially fab story. Eagerly looking forward to read the next chapter.

Loved it!

I’ve read all 13 chapters and keep dwelling on What next?

What about their continuing relationship? Do Sue and Ben need to leave home to continue?

I liked it, and I didn't want to.

I think that says it all.

5 stars, Mate. That was excellent, and the dialogue was funny but appropriate for the two characters in that situation.

First read this year's ago and it's still five stars.

We had a tree fort instead of a garden shed but it was awesome after swim team practice to lay together naked. The smell of chlorine still reminds me of those happy times.

Hairy pussy just rocks! "All you could usually see in the photos were bare breasts and a triangle of dark hair with just a hint of a slit, but it was more than I had seen in real life" 5 RATING