All Comments on 'The Garden Shed Ch. 05'

Hopefully, the two will end up together.

This is such a great series.Loving every chapter. It really reminds me of my relationship with my wife. No we aren't siblings, but we've been together since she was 12 and I was 13. We've grown up together and had all our sexual experiences with each other. Together now for over 50+ years.

This series really reminds me of how we explored our sexuality and learnt how to give each other pleasure. We grew up in the 60's and 70's I remember the problems with buying Durex and only being able to get them from the barbers or chemist and the embarrassment felt as a young man going to buy them.

They were horrible thick things compared to today's ultra thin ones. It was a standing joke that if you got your haircut on a Friday when you paid the barber would ask you "anything for the weekend sir?" i.e. do you want a pack of Durex.

Please, please keep this story going in the same vein. I'm really intrigued with how you are going to end the series and hope that Ben and Sue find a way to spend the rest of their lives together.

I’m really loving this series. Beautifully written and sexy as hell!

This story gets better each time.

Fantastic story, so well written and storyline so good, more please !!!

Young love is such fun. My first hated condoms too, and I agreed with her. Luckily she never got pregnant.

What a story! The detail is great without being overboard like some other stories are. I was holding my breath while they were in the kitchen with the folks in the garden, obviously the little head was doing the thinking then lol. With your knack for detail, I was in the bedroom with them all the while they progressed to full intercourse. Had me hard from the start, and I loved it. I was a little sad that Sue didn't wear a pair of her new sexy panties when she came to see Ben in his bedroom, but that's just my panty fetish speaking :) Looking for the next five star chapter, thanks.

This writing is how it's done. I truly wish more of us could do it like this.

The best fiction has the ring of truth in it, and you've done an excellent job of that. Is it history, or is it fantasy? I don't care. Everything is believable.

The mechanics of your writing are superb, never detracting from the story. I know it's work to maintain that level of professionalism, but in my opinion, is well worth the effort.

You're one of the few authors I find here worth reading (besides myself, of course). Continue this series, or start a new one. They've consumated their relationship, so I'm happy with how it ends if it ends here, but would be just as pleased to continue.

Continues to be a well-done series! Very erotic!

Maybe it's because you're writing from my era, but your slow development, earnest wonder, joy of discovery, panting excitement and thrill of incest lights my fire every time. Excellent. Please keep writing. I don't know where you would take these two kids from here, probably just leave them there and move on, but please do, keep writing.

I have enjoyed every one of these chepters and I hope there is more co come.

You write beautifully and it is so erotic.

Just wonered if you would have the sister wearing knickers - I find them more erotic than panties - though I know Americans luse that term.

loved it from chapter one

Best. Story. Ever.

I hope there's much more to come!

I love reading stories that are believable and not just fantasy. This one keeps getting better and better.

Very well written and so innocent! Well done, thank you!

I have been following this story and find I just can't wait for the next chapter! This is the right era and the storyline is bringing back so many wonderful memories for us.

Such lovely writing and such a hot sibling pair. This is how it really does happen.

I know as I have been in a similar situation.

This story just gets better and better

Good grief, man, I have run plumb out of adjectives with which to embellish my admiration, not to mention arousal. The pace of these chapters is exquisite, each building on the other, each bringing your little moths closer and closer to the flame, and, oh, what a flame it was as they fumbled toward ecstasy. You have the storytellers gift and a good hand with grammar and syntax. A very easy read from start to finish with every sentence throbbing with anticipation.

I thank you again for sharing your very considerable talents and please favor us drooling readers with more incendiary stories.

Really enjoying this.....PLEASE write chapter six asap!!!!

I really love Sue and Ben characters here! Shy little sisters are the best!

Really enjoying this series. Has me imagining my own shed and sister :)

Please don't make her pregnant, I think it ruins it and the realism. Just make them keep enjoying it in different environment and maybe try some kinks or add a friend

Excellently done. This is a story about sexual awakening and intimacy, so please don't turn it into a love story with a pregnancy.

The exploring is what has made this story enjoyable and that is what I think you should continue. Think of some exciting and slightly risque scenarios. The parents returning home early just as they are on the brink would be an exciting idea.

If you want to go over the top, then have the mother discover her daughter's panties and suspect something is going on. When she finally discovers the truth, have her confront her daughter and tell her it's okay as long as she is taking precautions.

From that point, you can take it anywhere you want, but do remember it's the adventure that has made your story a good read. Personally, I would have the mother as a frustrated housewife whose husband prefers golf. She's discovered the incestual relationship and eventually gives in to wanting her son.

That might need a change of perspective,but it would be exciting. If you want to discuss any ideas, feel free to contact me.

Best wishes with the next chapter and have fun writing it.

Write your story, not what other people are telling you to write. It's your ideas we're coming back for. If you want a pregnancy, get a character pregnant. If you want a character to turn into a rainbow and disappear into a pot of gold, do it -- it would be weird as fuck -- but it's your story.

The moment that other people start telling you what to write and how to write is the moment that THEY should write their own stories.

5 Stars.

I remember those days of trying to buy Durex without anyone recognising you. Most of us ended up buying them from the machines in pub toilets - 3 condoms for £1.

Great story and very evocative of how it was to be a teenager in the UK in the late 1970’s. No incest for me, but could have been me and my first “real” girlfriend that’s for sure

Oh those days of discovery.

Great writing just the right sped for anticipation and satisfaction.

I also agree with anonymous, keep the story yours all the way and don't let people influence your writing ability

Still one of the best brother/sister incest stories on Literotica. Nothing like youth and learning about sex. The fact that it is brother and sister just makes it that much more erotic. Love it when Sue wouldn't let him pull out the last time. I had a girl like that, we never used rubbers and luckily she never got pregnant. Guess she knew how her body worked better than I did.

I loved that chapter it just brought back times with a much loved girl, sadly lost.

So beautifully penned erotica. Remind me of my days with my first cousin almost 35 years back. It was so much sensual fun.