All Comments on 'The Gardener'

Enjoyed the story very much, perfect Earth day tale. Good luck in the contest! A8

An unusual,interesting and well written story, certainly a contender.

Enchanting tale Bear. It wetted my appetite and left me imagining what will come next

What a beautifully written story, and such a different idea, I hope perhaps you will write a follow up as you have left me very intrigued!

Best of Luck and all good wishes to you!

What a unique and interesting story. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.

This is literally fantastic and reminds me of 19th century writings. I loved it! Thanks

This is an interesting story. It gives us something new and original to enjoy. You're a man of many talents, Bear.

Gives a whole new meaning to the term 'summer (breeding) stock. *grin* Well done, Bear. Your dry sense of humor resonates through this tale.

What a wonderful tale...Blending your love of flowers with your love of erotica perfectly and the result is magic! Good luck with the contest Bear.

A wonderful dip into the imagination. Well done!

I really enjoyed the story and your style of wrting. Would love to see a follow up.

take on Earth Day. Good luck in the contest.

Both interesting and unique. Are you planning an additional installment to this story?

This was really very well done, and in a unique style. It was a fascinating read. Good luck in the contest.

Nicely worded

wonderful idea. Please let's have a sequel with more sex.

This high quality wordsmithing exercise resembles The Best Ever Massage; a great way to spend a few relaxing minutes while an expert, you - the author, provides superior mental masturbation for us, the reader, without the typical, anticipated hard core sexual manipulation. This IS hot, while being pure enough to share with my young daughter. What a wonderful treat.

Terse and lovely, sweet as nectar and thoroughly sensual. The gardener who is rewarded for his love for plants; the hybridization of a species through deeply seeding fecund floral wombs; the plants' brimful breasts, filled with spirit to thankfully replenish and reciprocate what he had gifted to them. Was the wine their bosoms' nectar all along?...My...

I only wish the explicit scenes were more described, but I do appreciate your uniquely succinct style too. Minimalism is good, but a further vivid detail here and there during the carnal acts would be wonderful in your future stories...But I am in no way complaining; all choices are correct. My heart vouches; it is the one that beats so fast now, thanks to this story.

I do look forward to those future stories. I'll be reading all your works.

Only just now reading this myself, but I find that it was written with an exceptional disposition for words. While I find the words you used admirably talented, they almost took away from the central focus. In a way, the words were brilliant, but my advice would be to try to dilute your skill ever-so-slightly to achieve longer stories with a more casual read.

My basic point is that, in an erotica, one tends to read for the emotional and physical depth, not necessarily for the mental. That being said, this story could have been written at any time, which would mean the advice would be more applicable when compared only to it.

Anyway, have a great day!