by sauceofallevil
I really like these focused short stories. Great job, and now excuse me while I check out another one of yours :)
You capture the dissolution of a marriage and the reawakening of someone who had forgotten how to smell the roses. Your metaphors regarding the rottening apple tree, for example, display an adept touch in capturing the vagaries of the human mind and heart that can exist between two yearning people. This story is one of the best I've read on Lit. More please.
Thank you for this story. You’ve given your characters a lot of depth in a few lines.
A very good short story. it was tender, loving and just a bit sexy the way these two woman played out the scene.
Beautiful. The pace is relaxed, the natural surroundings nicely evoked. Great maturity and positivity in the sex and the relationship between the characters.
I feel the same way about my apple tree. But, then I never had a gardener like Clara. Nicely written.
Like the other comments say ,your pacing on a short story is excellent, you let us get to know Julia and Clara and the work / client relationship before initiating the intimate scene which was very hot and sexy. As gardener I wish I had as much fun under an apple tree . Thank you
Brief-Hot-Passionate!
No romance, just a full blown & awesome sexual experience in 1-page. What more can one ask for in this life?
Another Chapter Of Explosive Sex If You Please!
I love your work Saucy! This was great, are there any plans to continue Curtain Twitcher?
A work of art.
Please leave it as it is. Sequels don't always add to the original.