All Comments on 'The Gear Jammer & The Hitchhiker'

Met Amy 50 years ago, when I was trucking around NZ. Love to know what she and Mac been up to. (Might have been her mum)

I really like this story - please continue, if your muse leads you so. :) I like stories that teach me something - I know nothing about trucking other than the engines are diesel. :)

Please continue the story, cant wait

It's good. Let's have more...….

Excellent. More, please, and soon. Descriptions of really nice people are all too rare, and your characters are good people, well drawn. The sexual activity is believable, not overdone.

If I could have given this story 6 stars, I would have done so.

Keep it coming. You've nailed the erotic storytelling perfectly. I really wish to know what happens next.

At least one more chapter as their relationship grows.

Very nice. More please.

Please tell us more about how Amy and Mac do in the near future.

Please continue the story. Love to see how you end it.

Looking forward to the next part of their story.

Add to it ASAP

There better be more, can't leave us hanging this way.

Nice plot, believable characters, please write more , need to see where this ends up, the journey is the best part.

Enjoying the story. Like how the characters are being developed. Nice to read about honorable people and sex is believable. Good job.

well written and I know trucking.3 million miles driven and a shade over 20years.

Hope you keep writing more to this story.

Well earned 5

Keep the Chapters Coming, Please.

Good stuff! Keep it coming. This could become a great serial.

Definitely want to hear more please

I would love to read more about this pair!

I hope that all of your chapters get written, I personally really liked it a lot. So my vote is CONTINUE.

Hey Scribe, I was a gear jammer back in 99 so I can understand where you are coming from. You have written a very good story and would love to see more along the truck driver side of this.

Rather heavy on the CB slang, not as much chit-chat now ("Puss In Boots" puts the story 2017 or later) as back in the '70s, and air-cooled beetles (pregnant roller skates) are rather thin on the ground.

Few errors in geography and truck details that only a trucker would notice, but if you're going to write a story where trucks are prominent you need to run it past a trucker. Nobody gets their million mile safe driving plaque in 5 years - would need to average almost 65 MPH to do it and stay legal with HOS.

Hope Mac's father turns up on an island somewhere - did anyone else get the reference?

HELLO, I JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ENJOYED YOUR STORY. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD TALE SPINNER, AND I TRULY BELIEVE THAT 1 OR 2 MORE CHAPTERS WOULD ROUND OUT THIS STORY AND LET US KNOW HOW THEIR RELATIONSHIP DEVELOPS. YOU ARE A GIFTED WRITER, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT.

Really enjoyed the story. More Please.

More, please

You can't stop here.

well developed. Romantic, erotic in parts with believable characters. Be good to see how it works out for them. Thanks

Love this so far. Been a trucker (a long time ago) and am surprised that the lingo hasn’t changed much in 40 years. The money I earned trucking (and later driving a cab) led to a degree in my preferred field.

My next career was an English teacher/professor. A quick critique: Typos happen, but it wouldn’t hurt to edit more proficiently. Those can be jarring to more judicious readers.

Most importantly: stick to one tense. The majority of the tale was in past tense (the easiest and most efficient way to write prose fiction), but you occasionally drifted into present tense - even more jarring.

I Was a class three delivery driver, all over Britain ,keep going enjoying it so far, when i stop enjoying i'll stop reading

Keep it going love it reminds me of my 30 years drivin longhaul

...so let it run.

Good plot, good writing so more would be well received.

This truckin story has a great plot, well-described characters, excellent dialogue, and perfect sex scenes. Your continuing writing plans are what we readers are looking forward to.seeing on this site.

I’d love for it to play out. Good story.

Please continue

I hope you continue Big Mac and Amy's journey. You seem to have knowledge of trucking and an understanding of the Drivers lives and life styles.

Keep the inky side on the paper and the words stretching for miles.

Let's have more

Yes you should definitely continue!

You have enough material for at least 3 or 4 more chapters! Keep writing.

Really enjoying this.. please continue

Enjoyable read.

Great story, without a doubt please add more parts. This was a really enjoyable story.

Please keep it going !

Good read lots of potential,

Please continue...would like to read more!

Best story I've read in quite a while...thank you...please continue

Geat story - good writing. I want to read more!

If you don’t write more I’ll . Well I’ll . I will ....... be very disappointed in you !

Loved it . Thank you .

Gaffer .

Nice story with interesting, likable characters. More, please.

GREAT STORY; KEEP IT GOING!

A little heavy on the slang unless it was the 70s. Other than that GREAT WORK, keep it up. I am a trucker with my own rig.

I hope you keep the story going. After telling her to never go barefoot in a truck stop shower, he laid down on the floor after sex. Ewww!

Loved it. I've put my time in on the old hardtop from coast to coast to coast (Canada and USA) so I sure enjoy another gearjammer's tales. I invite you to check out mine as well, good bud. You have a winning way of telling your story and I think it's just fine. I hope you bless us with a few more of that caliber. Sure enjoyed the read.

Do we want more?

Do Cowboys live in Texas? Of course want more!

I seldom (read never) add an author to my follow list after reading only one story but I just did after reading this one! You tell a good story lots of detail, dialog and the sex just fits in naturally. Looking forward to many more adventures of "The Gear Jammer & The Hitchhiker". And I'll be checking out your other offerings as I await more from Mac and Amy!

5 stars fer sure!

Cheers

SAGE

A great introduction to what I hope will be a series. Big Mac has plans for his life and it would be great to read those being developed along with Amy's. 5 stars from me.

give us more!!

The story was great; I never lot interest. We need to hear more about Mac and Amy!

I have already conjured up several endings... Waiting to see how mine match Yours.

How are chapters 2, 3, 4 & 5 coming along???

Are you gonna upload any more

In the words of ALABAMA.

Roll on big Momma!

Admirably human characters with surprising virtues.

More please....

Interesting story, but could you please pick a tense and stick with it? Thank you.

This definitively requires

a follow-up, I like these two.

Definitely need more chapters

As an interstate truck driver I would love to see where this goes, but looks like you haven't added to it in over a year.......

Really a good start on what could be an excellent story. You set the characters and the story line well. Lots of possibilities.