All Comments on 'The Gentle Breaking of the Waves'

This story - for me (de gustibus non disputandum est) is about as hot as it gets, because it is pretty clear that the author is a woman who experiences - and god how must she enjoy it - sex

The typical story in this genre is a fantasy - women are all multi-orgasmic through vaginal intercourse only. This woman - the protagonist of the story - is multi-orgasmic, but believeably so

Your choice of words is amazing and heightens the palpable passion that already is there. It was a joy to read your work. I can't wait to feast on another of your stories!

A truly feast of sex, extremely fruity. Such wonderful abandonment, giving themselves to each other under blue skies and hot sun. One thing: hubby is a miracle man for managing so many erections and hours of physical activity. His prowess is worthy of five stars as is Caroline's detailed descriptions of her sensations and much used vagina. Just glad they were not interrupted or spied on, two cliches that would have spoiled the splendid story.

A truly moving piece of reportage, by a creative and loving couple. What a magic opportunity. It’s said that luck is where opportunity meets preparation. Must be true, we are very lucky to have seen that here.