by BenjiBright
Don't keep us hang in here too long, I do love this start :)
Like the beginning. Keep rolling. Now you got me wondering what the hell happened to Jack.
So I clicked your story on a whim. I'm a straight woman; I don't usually even read Gay Male. That I'm sitting here eager to know what happens next suggests you've a real knack for story telling :). Love the time period and the character development thus far. Good luck with the next chapter!