All Comments on 'The Getaway Ch. 01'

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VanquishedVanquishedover 3 years ago
Great!

Clever twist. At first it was hard to understand how Heather could be so mean to him, but then it made sense! Natalie is really devious.

darthnader19darthnader19over 3 years ago
5 stars

Cant wait to read the next part

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Great stuff, Duck!

Natalie is incredibly devious with how she is manipulating Heather into thinking Larry enjoys their torments. I'm looking forward to more of this story. :)

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