All Comments on 'The Gift'

Great story. I hope there is a part 2 coming.

A very good start and a great plot with what appears to be fun characters. So let it rip I hope he makes her his willing and begging slave for his pleasure and her humiliation. Schedule is a slave so make her a slave for her master. Cheers

"I am absolutely one hundred percent series," She told him. Her face was very red now, and she was moving from one foot to another. But her voice was firm and she plunged on.

"I am absolutely one hundred percent series," She told him. Her face was very red now, and she was moving from one foot to another. But her voice was firm and she plunged on.

Great start! With a lot of potential. Some minor spelling errors* but overall very sexy.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Serious not series.

Wonderful!! I'd like to see their relationship deepen romantically as well as as a real dom-sub thing. This could be the end but I hope not.

Not really free use though.

More please! I loved how Clara came to Alex asking for what she wanted while still having the ability in herself to back out if she thought it was going south. I also enjoyed the fact Alex did not all of a sudden turn into a sadistic idiot once the gift was given

Any chance this will continue? This was a great story and I love the characters. I'd love to see Alex grow into being Clara's Master and owner, and Clara grow into his slave. There's not enough good Male-pov stories like that and I enjoyed this one.