All Comments on 'The Gift'

about a wife's love for her husband. This was an enjoyable read. Thanks.

Marty, A wonderfully sensitive and well written story.

A well-written little story, with believable characters. This author consistently delivers.

Marty, you have really excelled yourself with this one. A really interesting and well thought out story.

I found this story appalling. Your use of the words "gimpy", "crippled", "handicapped", and "disabled" and suggesting that anyone who is attracted to a person with disabilities has a fetish have lowered my opinion of this story. I would furthermore like to state that if some guy viewed me as a fetish, I would not sleep with him at all let alone wish to see him again. This is sick, degrading and ableist pablum in my opinion and this is why many men view women such as myself as a freak and something to be fetishized. People are not a fetish. Shame on you for writing such trash.

Marty....

This story reads as well the second and third times as it did the first time. It is superbly crafted and leaves me wanting even more that you have written. It is a winner through and through... the ending is exquisite. Will there be a sequel????

Thanks,

Ed

I loved the story but I also think your use of demeaning words like gimpy does spoil it.