All Comments on 'The Gift Ch. 01-05'

This was wonderful. More please. Soon.

Thank you

Looking forward to more. Thank you.

The cat part hit very close, yet I couldn't stop reading.

On both your nuptials and massive move!! It is a shock to be sure.

Awesome start; Cleo's story hit home for me as well. My cat has kidney disease and I am always concerned that I'll have to put him down. But until then, I let him be the jerk that he is. 😉

Again, welcime to the US and remember there ARE some of us that know a great way to cure a hangover is with a English fry-up!

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The part about Cleo touched me, I have had to put down 3 cats and it hurts very deeply. Please keep this going and welcome back.

first story I have read coming from this perspective - having been owned by a few cats the most memorable was with us for nearly 20 years and an insulin dependent diabetic for the last 10 of those years. She had a great life and never objected to shots twice daily. Remember you can't "own" cats they "own" you.

And i guess congrats on getting married, pretty good first five chapters, hoping for more to come soon

A very good story. Really looking forward to see where this goes.

Great start, hope to see the next chapter soon.

Great start up please write more

Please don't leave so much space between the Chapters. I read these stories while running, lifting weights, yard work, and while driving, so I use the Google Text to Speech App and when you leave that much space it stops reading and when I go to reset it, it starts at the beginning again and not where it was left off at.

Thank you for your consideration. Great story, by the way.

I am a pet lover who has outlived many cats. Once I took my ex-girlfriend's cat, whom we both loved, to a hospital at the end, when she was too broken up to do it herself. I hope so much that these two, united by sadness and grief, find love instead.

Great start - looking forward to reading your next chapter

I very happy your back and writing! You are one of my favorite author!

First - Congratulations on your marriage - I guess we’ll have to share your time with the lucky man! A wonderful start to your new work - up to your normal great effort.

Your stories are among the very best on this site!

Yawn inducing, repetitive, boring. She is NOT a character worth reading about, she's a selfish idiot who only thinks of herself, will know to never read you again.

Very well written...But this is soooo DARK for soooo long.

Now I need to read 5 more of these for clarity?

I may sample a lighter subject of yours...:+))

so sad losing a pet. Funny the things you remember so well when your 80. I remeber carrying my cat on a bus to the vet back in the 50s. She had distemper, of course they couldn't do anything. I think I lost more than one back then. Lost a dog in the 70s, another 3 in 80s. Cried for all of them. Good writing, need something happy to read.

over 78 yrs now an have to bury too many pets .dogs ferrets . most of the time when cats come and go when it's their time they go off some where & pass on.

Another incomplete story on Lit.

this shit is so damn hard to read because it brings me back to when my cat died. i had her for many many years and she was my lil buddy but towards the end she too stopped eating wouldnt drink water and was losing weight so fast. took her to the vet they did some tests and said she should be fine. after that she slowly started to eat again but a couple days later she got really bad again and took her last breath right in front of me. having a pet is so amazing and there are way more good times than bad but that one bad day when you have to put them down or they die naturally is just so bad. ill prob never own another pet its just too hard to say goodbye

That vet may a acquire an assistant and may do some designing of his own- on her belly...