All Comments on 'The Gift Ch. 11-15'

by Cynthia W.

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hornier_bastardhornier_bastardover 4 years ago
Loved this story

Thank you for writing... in a way, I hope you don't get a job, but in a much more real way, I hope you do!

Looking forward to the next installment... have added you as a favorite as well.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago

Beautiful story. Thank you so much!!

TheSecretBunnyTheSecretBunnyover 4 years ago
Sappy but a good read

The cat bits where the best, it reminded me of the cat I had. Best of luck with your writing..

rockytop2krockytop2kover 4 years ago
Bravo!!!

My compliments to you on a very wonderful and moving story. I love the raw emotion you convey in all the characters. As a man society says I should not be so moved but you sure tugged at all the heart strings! I look forward to more of your writings. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Thank you!

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11over 4 years ago
Absolutely nailed it - well done.

So poignant at times, a truly great story.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great sorry

You are a very talented writer. Of all the romance stories I have read, yours reach deep down inside to really hit the emotional core. Look forward too your next submission.

calgarycamperscalgarycampersover 4 years ago
Very good

Thank you for sharing

arrowglassarrowglassover 4 years ago
REALLY enjoyed this story!

Looking forward to a sequel!

realusmctazmanrealusmctazmanover 4 years ago
Awesome story

While not my normal choice (Sci/Fi), this is a wonderful story from an excellent author. I will have to read your previous works for sure. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing cause you definitely have talent. JT

rapperbsrapperbsover 4 years ago
Great Story!!

I am glad you are back! I loved this story. Congratulations on your recent marriage! The sadness Lu experienced in her life was believable and wouldn't surprise me to be a telling of a story close to you. Very well written, the ending was perfect for this story. It made me feel good that everyone ended up as they should, happy with their new situations and thriving. Looking forward to a followup story on this.

Thanks for writing!

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
GREAT STORY

FIRST TIME READER HERE. YOU GO GIRL. GREAT STORY. KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for the gift of this series. Looking forward to a sequel.

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago
Very good story

A lot of downs and few ups and very good ending with lots of soul searching in between. Nice writing. Welcome!

flareb2343flareb2343almost 3 years ago
RAIN DROPS

had a lot of rain in the house reading The Gift . I had a puppy that ran out into the street and was killed when I was 14 , at going on 78 have had to bury too many.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

SIMPLY WONDERFUL!!20 stars is close. Please write more, and maybe even continue this story. We have 2 couples to get married and 2 women that need to have the same name- MOMMY.

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