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by WickedAlchemy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A great story with potential for chapter 2 and beyond. I finished your story and looked for more. You could use an editor, most anyone would help you. Do not change your story just the grammar.

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Nowhere in the corridors, the pale greens and gray. Nowhere on the surface in the cold light of day. But, there in the midst of it - alive and alone. Words support like bone.