All Comments on 'The Gilded Gaze'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Amazing story I loved the slow burn and satisfying conclusion. Very hot.

BananaTequilaBananaTequilaabout 3 years ago
long time lurker, first time commenter

I made an account just to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. The hypnosis/mind control was so hot! There are some real gems in here. Thanks for such a great read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Ssalka is excellent writing and shines in his scenes. Powerful, dominating, hypnotic, and seductive. Given the strength of that character you probably could have cut most of the first two pages and started with his summoning.

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