All Comments on 'The Girl at the Library'

SO natural and beautiful and plausible....instant chemistry and pure passion.... more!!

What vivid imagery you did paint! Although you fleshed out (pun intended) the characters more in this tale, I found myself transported to the library. If not as an active participant, perhaps as a voyeur peering from between the stacks in the next row. You have a Fitzgeraldesque quality to your writings. My favorite line "Perhaps, I thought, that gravity was a lie and she was the reason I was bound to this Earth." could easily have been written by Scott describing Zelda.

you are a very good writer.

Please write more like this.