All Comments on 'The Girl From The Train'

Great story! i'm chaste, caged and locked and always mentally inject that into a good story. Like i said, Great Story. Thanks!

I hope you give this one a sequel and develop their relationship further. Please avoid cuckolding though, as the intimacy the characters showed demands something more

Thanks to you both. This will be a one shot though. I'll leave the rest to your imaginations!

I love the pacing. Everything in this story is filtered so clearly through the boy's personality, so by the time the girl gets his clothes off, we already have the gist of who he is. Then when she turns up the heat and makes a mess of him, it has some impact because we got introduced to him as a regular guy on a train, not as a submissive.

The physical description of the environment is great too-- every detail adds personality so I can picture it in my head. This is an instant favorite.

You had written it so good. I could think myself to that situation and loving it.