All Comments on 'The Girl I Wanted To Bed Ch. 05'

The story is being cut off way to much and nothing really happening.

You could have given it a bit more substance before posting.

Please finish...i knowa man like rylan.

I love how this story is progressing. "Will you please show me what you have done today?" he said. His voice was a deep drawl and for one hallucinating second his eyes dropped from her eyes to her lips and a glint passed over his steel grey eyes before he stared down into her green eyes again." My fave part! Please hurry with Ch. 06! :D You're a fantastic writer.

Make it longer, please it is reaaalllyy good! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nothing is more frustrating than getting involved in a story only to find that it was left unfinished. We did not even arrive at a point where anything occurred between them other than the one possessive kiss in an alley. Very disappointed. a thrown together crappy ending is even better than no ending.

I echo the previous comment. I hate it when I've found a good story and talented story telling only to find it unfinished. Please keep telling this story. Thank you.

Please please please please please please please please please please finish the story.... it's too good ... don't leave it hanging here

I agree with the above comment, please continue the story so we can find out who ends up on top. :-)

Please continue the story...really like it so far!! Please come back and tell us the rest of the story!

Do I need to say more? Okay I'll say it: More!😎