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by The_Duke_Is_In

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Looking forward to more!

I don't think I have ever read a story like this before. The main character is winsome...yet almost morose at times. I enjoy her tough yet sweet nature. Eager to see where your imagination takes Thara

Thanks for sharing!

EmmeranEmmeranover 5 years ago
Nicely done

Needs some proof-reading and editing. Contact me if you want some help with that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good beginnings

Enjoying the tale so far. I await seeing how the story develops further. Fairly good characterisations. I agree with another commenter about your needing a proofreader and editorial assistance, just to make sure that, the few there are, sentences do not get disjointed with missing or wrongly placed words.

Devir Ginator

AveryAlwaysAveryAlwaysover 5 years ago
So good!

Please keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

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10/31/20 - HAPPY HALLOWEEN! I'm ba-aaack! I'm so sorry for the long hiatus, my job has been sucking the life out of me, especially since COVID started. But you lucky readers will soon be getting more Thara and Ardon in the future. Expect a new chapter in the next week or so. ...