All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

The author is truly a talented writer!!!

A much higher grade of writing than is normally found here. Kudos.

...story.

Absolutely loved it. A great combination of a real story, with a plot, well researched, believable characters. And on top of that a very very sexy episode between the women. A really hot read, Sche, can't wait for more.

Excellent story with the sex an added bonus to the plot, not just the whole reason for it. Of course, now I'm wondering if Charlotte will get away, and if she does whether she'll then make it back to Berlin?

... of sex and story. Very well done! ~Imp

This is one of those stories you print out and keep in the nightstand to read over and over again.

Oh my, that was a good one! The setting, the dangerous feel of the time and place, not to mention the beautiful Fräulein Westerfeld -- wow!!! Intense, hot, just so good it makes me want to cry.

Thank You!

MooncatX

makes me wish I was lesbian - instead of just a dirty old man.

Keep writing...

I normally avoid period pieces like the plague, but this was brilliant. The story kept me fascinated throughout. The heat between the two women was excellent. Well done!

....S-Des

loved it.

When can I expect more from Charlotte and Gabi. What a turn on, you have great talent, and this could be a novel...

Agree with the last commenter - more please :)

Great story. Images of the environment are very real. The relationship is magic. Thanks

Loved it. Hope you'll continue.

I agree with the other comments. Great read.

I did pick up the foreshadowing of the jaw injury. :) Did everyone? Was it that obvious? After getting that one on the first read it makes me want to go back and read again, like a good novel.

Excellent scene-setting, detail and atmosphere. A bit more editing would have improved it (some grammar and phraseology rather clunky).

First I orgasmed, then I cried. Thank you for the lovely story.