All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good storyline...

I loved this, however it seemed rushed. Slow it down... explain things a bit more. Something was just a bit off... that is the best advice I could give and I gave you a 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!

Loved it, more more!

~nose bleed~

Not easy finding erotic stories like this that are good.

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