All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

Another excellent tale, please keep writing, you are the best on lit.

I really like the ending, I had really though that her mother caught them doing something else and not pulling weeds

I hope it's not the end. Maybe Part 2 as Leslie joins them giving Sally a part time job as well as Sally and Leslie take time out to have some fun. Part 3, the threesome continues but they hatch a plan to include Sally's mom. Part 4, Lisa is taken for a night out, they get her tipsy and after arriving back at Phyllis's house where the seduction and fun begins

Why brilliant? Because of the dialogue and intimate thoughts, spoken from a woman's point of view. I'm a guy, btw. One time, a female co-worker and I stayed at the same hotel on a business trip. Once she convinced me that having sex with me was 'the furthest thing from her mind,' she related several stories similar to this one, and from the same womanly perspective. So I'm always pleased to see a story posted under your name, Ann Douglas!

from the beginning to that clever twist ending.

Ann, you've done it again. I'm dripping from my self induced orgasm and from reading your delicious story. Wouldn't catch us pulling weeds would they - uummmmm !

Good and yummy story.

You are a writing machine, pumping out one excellent story after another! thank you very much for sharing this with us!

Thank you

Loved it. Delicious and hot! Say though, I saw something worth fixing:

In the sentence ending:

"... Lisa Ross exclaimed as she looked at her daughter and next store neighbor, both down on their knees."

It seems worth changing 'next store neighbor' to 'next-door neighbor'. Which I'm pretty sure is what you meant.

I'd love to see another part to this story - I like the characters very much, and their attraction to each other is electric!

Sweet story, I came three times! That is always a good sign!

All the best,

Kathy