All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

WOW!!! Incredible story and very nicely written — so HOT!!! I really hope that we see more of this story line. Zack and Jenny would be great as would the obvious threesome!!! Thank you for sharing this awesome story!!!

Incredible story. I love the premise.

Loved it. I figured that the girls would invite him over.... glad they haven't, yet

Jenny and Yuuki are amazing! The narrator's pretty good too. I'd like to have been there to help him ....

5 stars

I don't think lesbians would like this in real life, but it works as a plot.

Super first time story. Believable. Realistic. Good job.

Oh, I can so relate to this. As a teen I was in the same situation with my slightly older female neighbor. She wasn't gay. But the two of us did share a few shows with each other. It all started one evening when I wondered out of my bathroom naked to get some clean clothes. Walking back into the bathroom I became aware that she was watching me. From there we both just kind of continued or little game till summer was coming to a close. And we headed in different directions.

Enjoyable story, hopefully it stays as voyeur/exhibitionist.

So many avenues to explore here. Have fun with your characters. Very hot.

Wow! Absolutely loved this.

Excellent writing! And great execution of the hot idea! I'm not sure why you think it might need more editing.

Followed this story from bdsmr. Love your captions and this story! I love orientation play as a kink, but I never really liked the whole "fucked straight" or degradation aspect that make up a lot of the similar blogs I've seen. I love how your captions and stories feel so much deeper and hotter. You're definitely the best writer I've seen with this kink!