by SkyBubble
I put my fingers inside her vagina and found her clitoris… I think you need some anatomy lessons.
Good premise.
Rushed sex. Lacks details. No reluctance at all. No lack of knowledge about what a cock looks like, feels like, enjoys.
Three stars.
Stilted dialogue, as if written by a bored accountant, ruined whatever heat this might have had.
They should have huffed airplane glue first then the location of her clitoris hidden in her ass might have made more sense.
No tension e.g., question of using birth control (or not) ignored, why now - this quy and not another, then the sex was by the numbers
Whoever wrote this has never had the pleasure of exploring a womans pussy. The whole story is fictional - or just poor writing. Get yourself laid and write about that.
"why now - this quy and not another"
"Have you ever had sex?"
"No," Belinda said softly, with a touch of sadness in her voice.
She is a touch sad that she hasn't yet had sex. She's ready. She's comfortable with him -- she trusts him. They've known each other for years, and Belinda knows that this guy will make sure it's a good first experience for her. She trusts him. So she decides that he's the guy who can make her first time worthwhile. She decides to go ahead because she's comfortable with him.