All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door Pt. 01'

My new favorite story! Can’t wait for the next part !

I really like the start of your story. Not sure how many chapters you plan on writing for it, but I definitely think it's a good beginning. Keep up the good work 👍

I am sure the next chapter will be.

A beautiful first story.

Please keep writing. I think you'll be a great writer. I hope Gabs and Gracie work things out.

far too much lead-in.

Awesome! Can't wait for the rest.

I think you made an Nice start here and me personal would like it if you did the next part in Grace point of view Anyways realy Nice start

not a bad first part, gabs was really getting into the whole thing until her friend told her that she had fallen in love with her, and that was when gabs lost it,can't wait for the next part

Thank you for the amazing story. I really enjoyed it.

Sweet and innocent and touching.

Hey I usually don’t comment cause I’m just as awkward as gabby lol. I’m not usually into HS story’s but I related with gabby so gave it a whirl and so far it’s pretty good. However the one main thing I really dislike is how Gracie is constantly saying “you’re beautiful don’t change” when she literally changing everything physically about her and peer pressuring her into doing things she’s clearly uncomfortable. Though it makes sense with the whole loosing loved ones she’s got controlling issues. I’ll keep an eye out for the next one happy writing.

For a first ever story, this is very good indeed! It was enjoyable, even without any sex. I don't know too much about superheroes but I could still get a feel of what you were trying to say. Good job!

I need more. I love everything.

Good story. Thanks.