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I close my eyes. "I'm yours." It is as simple as that. I won't question it. Not when I feel like I can breathe for the first time tonight.
She pulls out something from her jacket and puts a box in my hand. "So, you'll come with me?"
I nod and look down at the box in awe. The same box she tried to give me before. The one that scared the living shit out of me. And now it is the key to my future. My future with her.
"How did I know to come here?" I let her open the box and place the diamond ring on my hand. My heart is full and my eyes are tearing up again.
She smirks. "We met here. I'm guessing you don't remember?"
I shake my head.
"Well, good thing we have the rest of our life to make new memories. Better ones" She leans down and kisses me.
I nod against her lips.
"I love you." I kiss her back.
"And I will forever be yours." She places my hand over her beating heart.
For once I feel my heart beating through her. She has my body, mind, and soul. And I can't picture my life any other way.
- COMMENTS
galadriel_fan23 days agoWow. I am so embarrassed to admit I have completely underestimated you, SkylerLuv. I thought I had read enough of your work to know what I would be getting, but I was so wrong. This is compelling in completely different ways than anything else of yours I’ve read.
I am a fan of the”tell the story from two perspectives” school, but this may be the first time I’ve noticed it in combination with the present-tense/past-tense angle. Apparently not for everyone but worked in a big way for me.
And style aside, it is a great story. Emma is so damaged to start but improves with Camryn; I like the narrative. I thought it was a good choice not to focus on exactly why Emma was on the bridge that particular day. And making her not being able to remember from before the accident is heart-wrenching. So thank you for resolving with a positive outcome.
Anonymous7 months agoI thought it was really good. It would be great to give more context as to why Emma’s parents didn’t approve of Cameryn. If it was the naked art photos then I would be a little surprised considering the artist context.
Rex0naover 1 year agoThe lack of consent and safe word is a bit troubling, but otherwise a lovely read.
Lions86over 1 year agoim not really a fan of the flipping back and forth from past to present if im being honest. would much rather have had the story be told in the present by both parties with scenes of flashbacks
