All Comments on 'The Girl Upstairs'

by JohnFranks

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rgraham666rgraham666over 17 years ago
Nice

A sweet little story.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Endearing Read!

Kevin finds out the love of his life, Lindsey is employed by a Massage Parlor. At first upset, he reconciles and the two of them explore their life style options. Lovely Story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Incredibly.......

Touching. I would like to see this story line continue - following them long enough to be sure this relationship takes.....

Swedeq

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
uncommon

Uncommon, but endearing. Despite the highly unexpected "left turn" regarding the nature of her employment, the story ends up being a beautiful love story.

Nice work.

-- KVK

Paniolo BoyPaniolo Boyover 17 years ago
Yes!

Great read! Unusual story line but very plausible! Keep the stories coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Nice!

Great job on this story! Maybe a little predictable but a lot of fun to read. Keep it up!

DirtyAliceBlackDirtyAliceBlackover 17 years ago
Moving

It was really moving I think and nicely written. Nice one ;)

Alicexxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice

I liked how both characters opened up to each other, and the twist well done.....glad this story ended on such a hopeful note. JV

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sad Story Nice Ending though

Very sad story but at least they were able to come together in the end. Very Well written. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
:)

well love is not wrong but the massageparlor definitely is. Hope they can get something cocking :)

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
WHAT A GEM !

Absolutley loved it! More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
How does the story end

this is a good read my friend please keep going will look forward to reading more

auhunter04auhunter04about 7 years ago

the ending made the entire story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So is he going to be a massive cuck as she just fucks dudes everyday?

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