All Comments on 'The Girl with the Freckles Pt. 03'

This is so hot yet sweet with tender love and passion born from pure affection for one another. And now that her sister accepted him I can't wait for them to meet each others parents, should be a blast and hopefully a happy future together.

5*

...........you sort of lost your penchant for your freckled fantasy as your story continued. Your love for freckles was the basis for the story and it seemed to wane as you wrote though your closing paragraphs re-established it to a degree. Don't let the air go out of your initial assertion relative to your LOVE for your lady friend's freckles.

You really played the sister off well.